Tuesday, August 5, 2008

apart,Torn

unbid,crept in like a cold stream
through the confines of my heart
trailing a path i knew not
scorching the trails it traced

agony is the spark
gravity the import
life the victim
writhing unseen

3 comments:

Dragonfly said...

Hats off to my poet friend! ;) I m not that good with poems though!

angie said...

i feel shy to call this poetry ...
but ... danx!! :)
its a jumble of words that denote the turmoils of one's heart :)

Dragonfly said...

Thats about the same explanation I had in mind about poetry ;)